I was tired. I was cranky. And for some odd reason school wasn't helping that. Monday I had about 4 hours to finish a three paragraph paper for my IEW writing assignment. For those of you who have done IEW then you'll remember the "writing from pictures" where you have three pictures that correspond with each other and one paragraph is supposed to correspond to one of the pictures. Well, the three pictures I had basically looked like the story of Daniel in the lion's den. There was a guy in armor, an old man, and a lion.
Well, finally cranking up my determination and picking a coarse of action, I wrote the below.
Unfading
By
Willa Howard
Upon
the charming Isle of Airrenate,
Past
the guards and past the gate,
Down
through the streets and lanes,
Past
the storehouses of summer’s grain,
A
house stands tall and straight.
There
upon the wooden windowsill,
A
candle burns with flames a’thrill,
And by
it sits a young maiden fair,
With
sea blue eyes and golden hair.
There
she waits, waiting still.
She
sits in patient wait for a man,
For to
marry her is his plan,
And so
she waits for him to return,
From
the battles and concern,
To
return to his beloved clan.
One morn on the Isle of Airrenate,
Past
the guards and past the gates,
Down
through the streets and lanes,
Past
the storehouses of summer’s grain,
Down
to the house sitting tall and straight,
Came
her lover riding, riding, riding.
~*~*~*~
His brazen hair hung in curls,
Cascading down
in bushy furls,
His
armor blazed in the morning sun,
His
sword any wild beast to stun,
His
teeth gleaming like snowy pearls.
There
at the door her lover reined,
All
her love to come and be gained.
Upon
his panting chestnut mare,
Up he
swept his gold maiden fair,
No
more with yearning be pained.
It’s radiance a great ghostly
light,
Floating
above the roofs with pride,
Smoothly
flying on its nightly glide,
Ravens
passing over its brilliant light.
Then
all at once the enemy struck,
Invading
the town, its peace to pluck,
With
flashing swords and shining steel,
Not a speck of mercy did they feel,
Into
the helpless town they snuck.
The
chariots came in flying, flying, flying.
~*~*~*~
Down
they flew through Airrenate,
Past
the guards and past the gate,
Down
through the streets and lanes,
Past
the storehouses of summer’s grain,
To a
house standing tall and straight.
The
chariots by monstrous lions
driven,
All in
their path down were stricken,
Roaring,
clashing, clawing, screams,
Eyes cold, cruelty, coruscating gleams,
Mercy nor
grace none was given.
Up
the maiden’s lover leapt,
"Justice," he cried, "must be kept."
And
with no kiss to bid her goodbye,
Her
lover left with a battle cry,
Never
enemies’ victory to accept.
And
there on the bloody highway street,
Her
true lover death did greet,
With
all courage he had met
The
enemy onslaught, right to set,
But
now none would sing of the feat.
Her
lover his last breath was drawing, drawing, drawing.
~*~*~*~
When
morn finally shined upon Airrenate,
Dead
were the guards, and bloody the gate,
The
streets were still, and lanes filled
With
all the bodies cold and killed,
Sharp
had been the evil knife of fate.
And
the golden maiden still,
Waits,
waits, for her lover killed,
Yet
now in death, her eyes are closed
Blood
upon her chest exposed,
Fallen
by her true lover stilled.
Yet
still one flicker of life remains
It can
neither see, nor feel pain,
The
candle in the windowsill
Burns
brightly, brilliantly still,
It’s
light flaming amongst the slain.
The
candle still is burning, burning, burning.
~The Scribbler in the Attic
All I can say is, wow! I would never in my life be able to do that good (I am not a poet!). Fatastic - A+! ;)
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Amber
WOW!! What an amazing poem! You are a really brilliant poet! It's beautiful, the flow of the words, the emotion and everything! You are really talented!
ReplyDelete~Jess~
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Hi, Willa!
ReplyDeleteLet me begin by saying that I am not usually very fond of poetry. I know some people just love to sit down and read poems; I don't. But this poem is amazing! I loved it! Great job. You might make me a poetry-lover yet. :)
-Tricia Ann